4/11/2007

11april2007wednesday

Eyes were on the clock at 07:30

Gulf News..


News:



Readers' column- Gulf News

Look Within: I see many reports in which parents blame the media for spoilig thier children. What about the time when parents use abusive words in front of their children on the phone or on the road? Do they think that their children are naive and do not understand them? Or what about the time when a parent doesn't want to miss his/her favourite show not conisat of the content and whether their children are watching? These parents should stop blaming the media and watch their own behaviour. - Haroon Salem.

Advertising: 1. Mohammed Bi Rashid Est. ( For Young Business Leaders)*****

(a) Visual of a lady:

HD: Because he entrepreneurial spirit is the basis of success.

Copy: Since I was a child I have loved henna. SME helped me tur my passion into a sucessful business, but not without a lot of hard work and dedication on my part. Since then, my company, Heritage for Henna, has become an international success. I am so proudn I earned it, will you?

www.heritageforhenna.com

(b) Visual of a child pampering her doll

HD: SME is for UAE nationals with dedication and a dream. Without amition and hardwork, success would only be good luck. At SME we provide the framework for success though training, adice, knowledge and other development oriented initiatives. Together we can make your dreams a reality. Build your success with SME

For more infoormation ... or visit our website at www.sme.ae

***** Ad campaign to motivate UAE citizens. Nation's vision is being reflected in this campaign, with its deep rooted cultural values...


2. Abyaar (Gulfnews)*

Our mission:

Total commitment to uncompromising quality. Nurturing excellence in every sphere of operation. Seeking out the best, in construction, design and location. Crating innovtive projects that deliver value and satisfaction. Forging partnerships based on mutual trust and common values. Working with intergrity, building investment potential. Paying attention to every need

Excellence in every detail.

* Its an interesting visual, but it took a little time to register the craftmen at logo fine-tuning work.


3. Rasasi Ad (Full page)**

HD: If we don't pick them before sunrise, the price of perfume rises.

Copy: At Rasasi, the science of perfume is also a labour of love. Which is why we must hand pick our delicate jasmines before the sun rises, or risk losing as much as 20% of thier precious fragrance in value. For those who want the world's best perfumes, the sun never sets on Rasasi.

Rasasi - Irrestible.

** The visual of a jamsine(?) in soft focus.. I find the copy is bit confusing.. the headline gives an impression that dedicated Rasasi gives topmost priority to keep the quality of the Jasmine perfume. Compromise on time, may result in loss of that authentic fragrance, eventually creates scarcity in the market, and a price hike. ( it also connotes, they are fullfledged, with it's state-of-the-art facilities to get volume every day)

The copy part goes in a different direction.. But I liked the last line.. how it's been derived from the sun element...

Still, as a reader, I am not fully satisfied.. something "lingering on air".....comprehension problem(?)

Please give me your views
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(a) shibumarett@hotmail.com writes:
its about how the brand is committed. The last line I guess puts the above copy in a nutshell and in perspective...read the last line first and you will get it. In order to bring the fullest fragrance, the flowers are picked up early in the morning....the implication is that, or inference to the reader should be, that Rasasi is natural perfume. The price rise is mentioned to make the consumer understand that Rasasi knows about this nature's fact and so they wake up early to save the consumer's 20%


4. Emaar (GulfNews pg48)***

HD: Step into a world of opportunity

Copy: True business partners provide a rich and resourceful environment to conduct business. This creates a whole new world of opportunity for companies to realise their full potential by exposing them to world-class manufacturing practices and driving them into new dynamic markets.

With an emphasisi on social and economic responsibility, Emaar Industries and Investments nutures long-term partershop that set industry standards and creates sustainable industrial growth.

www.eii.ae

***Nice ad.. simply beautyfull and convincing.


5. Yesterday, there was a teaser about this identity change.

Out door Advertising

1. Masafi (Location: Sheikh Zayed Road, Near Trade Center) * *
Fruits Obsession

* Nice creative route, but I was obsessed with the lady in that.. couldn't find the fruits in her hand. 'Focus shift'....(?).


2. OTS value (opportunity to see) of this colour combination is very low for an outdoor advertising. (just an opinion)

Eyes OFF at 12.30.

4/10/2007

10april2007tuesday (eyes...ON)

Eyes were on clock at 06:02

(details soon)

Book
(We mentioned about Brazilian author Paulo Coelho, with an article A journey through the Middle East(Interview-by Manal Alafrangi, Gulf News, 06april2007.. Please scroll down to see the post for details....)

(details later)

News


Business


Advertising


1. Hummer Ad (Gulf News)***



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Outdoor Advertising:

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2.

4/09/2007

09april2007monday

details soon...

Advertising:

1. Qatar Steels *
New era
New expectation
New Identity
* teaser...Its about changing Identity.



2. Gulf News Self ad (Appointment)**
** different

Outdoor:



1. Shoemart Van ***


eyes were on the clock at 06.02
2. Lorent***
***It seems eyelash has been extended.. Good retouching.. the expression comes out well.

4/08/2007

08april2007Sunday

Eyes were on the clock at 6.02

Gulf News
News



1. Burj Dubai now has more floors than any building in the world. (Gulf News)

Burj DUbai , alreay the tallest structure in the Middle East and Europe, nowhas more floors than any building in the world.

Curenly at 120 storeys and 422.5 meters high, the Emaar Properties building is also one of the five tallest structures in the world.... Designed by Chicago- based Skid more, Owing & Merril, Burj Dubai is being constructed by high-rise experts Samsung Corporation o South Korea... Burj Dubai will have residences and commercial spaces apart from the Armani Hotel Dubai.

Advertising:


1. (GMC-Sierra)*

Headline: Works hard. So you don't have to.

Introducing the more powerful all-new 2007 sierra

* Vehicle, especially body has been touched up badly.. it fails to give a reall appeal. Also the shining part, at the wrong place. Nice headline.. convincing


2. (du)**

Headline: "Dad.. I got an 'A' on the midterm!" "That's my hero!"

Before du 30 fils .....00:00:03...... With du 1.5 fils

Pay by second

More calls, more talktime, mor control

** Simple.. to reach everywhere... and accessable to everyone tooo!


3. (-)*

*hmmm


4. (-)*

* Good one, executionally... and the effort behind.

eyes OFF at 12.30am

4/07/2007

07april2007saturday

I could not see any special ads today..
Gulf news has repeated the fire ad off 'makes you think' campaign, came down to half page.

Advertising


1. RAK Bank***. This is being widely advertised on mupies across UAE.

4/06/2007

06april2007friday

Art:

1. Brazilian author Paulo Coelho
A journey through the Middle East(Interview-by Manal Alafrangi, Gulf News, 06april2007)



"Dubai is one of the most futuristic cities I have even been to. Surrounded by the desert and the sea, Dubai defies the visitor. It appears like an improbable miracle that is impossible to grasp"
Writer Paulo Coelho to a deep admiration for Arab mysticism. Its stories and fables, and how he infused his work with themes from this region
Some of his books include:
The pilgrimage
The Alchemist
Brida
The fifth Moutain
Veronica decides to die
Eleven Minutes
The Zahir
Like the flowing river
He also adapted The Gift (Henry Drummond) and Love Letters of a Prophet (Khalil Gibran).
****(for more details, please visit shajizone-discussion, www.shajizone-artstick.blogpost.com from the link)

2. Various styles of Arabic Caligraphy (Gulf News -weekend review, page 17)

** Sourced from www.islmicart.com ,explained various styles such as Naskh, Thuluth, Riqa, Deewani, Kufi and Ta'leeq, using the Arabic letter 'Kaaf'


Advertising

1. SKI DUBAI (Friday Mag) ****

Headline: Escape every day

Body: Jump over the daily grind.

Fly over nagging thoughts.

Glide into your own space.

Cut through monotony.

Ski Dubai. Leave it all behind.

Sky Dubai- an unforgettable snow experience

**** A nice creation. Makes us realise that we are living mechanically in this world.. reminds us the need of an escape, atleast for a short while... that's their objective is all about.. succeeded.



2. Baby Shop (Child-Safety-first Campaign 2nd ad) ****

Headline: A 9 month old sees no difference between the two.

Body: Children don't see things the way we do. Which is why, we need to make sure they are kept safe from possible hazards, at home, on the road and everywhere else. To know how you can keep your child safe from uforeseen danger, remember to pick up a child safety booklet on your next visit to Babyshop.

**** A Nice ad, for a good cause. From the marketing point of view, the emotional factor will definitely win the parents' heart... a non verbal communication.



3. Pan Emirates *

*Weak ad for a furniture showroom
4. NATUZZI **

**Good Art Direction and photography.. but less impact on a magazine.. might look good as a pull page in the newspaper.

4/04/2007

05april2007Thursday

Eyes were on clock at 6.07




1. A poem by Britles (Gulf News)
*****( To read this poem, pls visit the link shajizone-artistic, on the right)



Business


Advertising



1. Dulux Ad
**Now This ad makes sense. Last week, Dulux claimed that Burjuman Centre 'depends' on the brand. Usage of words makes a lot of difference)

2. Du (Gulf News)**

Headline: Life..made out of seconds

Body: Pay by the second

more calls, more talktime,more control

National mobile voice calls 0.5 ils per second.

International mobile voice calls are charged by the second as per pubished tariffs.


3. Gulf News- Makes you think ad (4th in the campaign-medical)**

body: Thanks to the medical breakthoughs, hman are living longer. As stem-cell reserch forges ahead, what will be the consequences of a generation that can cheat death? Makes you think dosn't it? But that's what we're here for.

*** 4th ad of the campaign that's has been runing this week. Here they came down to half page. From the aeshetic point of view, this fails to stand along with the other imageries.


Outdoor


1. Chopard (located at Al Mulla underpass, towards Dubai.)***

***A simple creation with a doted background, makes the outdoor eye catching..

04april2007wednesday

1. Mixed response on the artilce about radio ads, came in 7days daily, yesterday.
"...There are some good ads on radio like the one where a baby says "Borders and also the "Home Centre" sale about priorities in life.." (comments Abbas, Dubai.)
2. There's a readers survey conducted by 7days sponsored by Etihad holidays, Supported by ADCB, Dubai Green Community, JW marriot, Lagoon and Vergin Mega store. www.7days.ae You could win a trip to Malasia.

Advertising



1. Cartier (Gulf News) ***
Cartier ads always give the passionate feel. you just blow the vistle...



2. XPRESS (Gulf News) ***
Headline: Your world, expressed in a weekly tabloid.

Out tomorrow

Local events, International news. Extensive sports coverage. Find what interests you ina world-class weekly tabloid.
XPRESS= nothing Xpresses it better.

*** attractive.. I liked the name chosen and its twist. Otherwise as an Indian I would have neglected, being taken the name like Indian Express, one famous daily backhome. Here it's a weekly tabloid and reviews the week passed by.... out of press.. rather 'Ex' press
3. Water (Khaleej Times) ****

Headline: Only 1% of earth's water resources is drinkable. Save water.

****Nice thought.. But the logos are tooooo big. 'Bigger' than message.

Outdoor


1. Sahara Centre (Near Galadari Signal, Also on Mupi across Sharjah) ****
Headline:
Get ready for a royal adventure
Will you be a king/queen of Sahara

****Nice one, captivating

4/03/2007

03april2007Tuesday

eyes were on clock at 6.04

1. Radio ads turn me radio ga ga.. (7days daily)
What is it about adverts on Dubai radio that makes listeners want to scream and swithc straight off?
...our air wves are particlarly jammed with irritating adverts...mind destroying advertisments

"...most radio ads are terrible, I personally feel the scripts I read very annoying. They always want ot use sttupid fake accents and have some unrealistic dialogue goin on between two people. Woman in the ads do nothing but shop or tell their husbands about a shop or a mall. It all just mekees you want to change channels" -A voice over artist.

"..when certain ads come on the radio, I can barely stand to listen to them.."
Tim, a creative working at a top ad agency in dubai argue for his sake, by comparing it to the world radio scenario, but admits the fact, saying "whoever writes these ads, please don't insult our intelligence"
"Radio is not as sexy as TV, it doesn't have the same power to captivate an audience... some of the Dubai DJs are so ill-informed that I'd rather listen to the music and sprinkling of ads than have to put up with these people reading off press released or giving us the benifits of their wisdom. ... I just get angry listening to the rubbish these people are paid to spout

(I remember a radio ad done by JWT, Dubi on Banana brand, Chiquita. It is a swaying lines na na and get repeated to make feel as if it's banaana.. (Do Sing along).


2. Air Arabia IPO hits3.7billion... the Initial Public Offering of Ari Arabia has attracted close to 40,00 suscribers and was 1.5 times oversubscribed... largest in te UAE

Advertisng

Iternationa l Media Zone:

Headline: Get ready to Shift.

Body Copy: Pre-built Units at International Media Production Zone. All you have to do is move in.

A specialised free zone dedicated to the graphic art, publishing and packaging industris, IMPZ gives you a range of pre-built showrooms and multi-use warehouse to choose from...

**** The visual is of a colour separation sample where the colour (CMYK) registrations of the headline, have been shifted.... good concept.

2. Dubai Silicon Oasis Authority

*** I afraid this ad would clash visually with other property ads. It has got a fantastic and impressive headline...that's enough, for the buyer they are looking at. He doesnt' have to read the body copy.

Headline:

20 mins from Jebel Ali Airport

15 mins from Dubai International Airport

10 mins from the central business district.

1.5 mins from your daughter..




3. Chevrolet

Headline:

As optimist, we're simply happy to ask you to\

"read between lines"

Body copy

Buying a car can be depressing at times. A pessimist's line might be to for-\

get the deal that requires no down payment and no payment for 6 months,

while a cynic's line might refute the idea of finding a car offerning bene-\

fit-your-budget finance rates, no salary transfer or spnsor stipulation.

**** Nice creative. seems it's for award. and sure it would fetch that.

Here in the copy above, I used '\' to mark the line where all it gets broken, since allignment is boxset. I only wish it was a full page ad (may be it's just an insertion for an award entry, who knows?)


3. ****HSBC ad

Headline:

6 p_rc_nt

(you only get it with e)

Bodycopy: Looking for higher interest with easy access? at 6% per annum, eSaer is the first online account to bring you much higer returns than a regular saving account. And your money is only a mouse-click away...

**** Nice and innovative. The creative brain behind would either be a scientist or a psychologist.

4. Ohh.. no.

What's in thier mind?

a) Did they try to personify the vehicle and its coolest nature, even on rough offroads, by placing it on air, symbolic with an imagery of a woman on meditation? (if that's the case.. I would give 5/10 marks, 'coz I think, people mostly long for 4x4 vehicle with a persona getting even with their passion.. there's difference between riding on horse and a donkey)

b) If they relate the woman, to the driver, again it goes wild. The state of mind of the driver bashing dunes would be entirely different... He would be in a rocking mood.

Outdoor

1. Sheikh Zaayed Road: Brand: Pokka (soft drinks and juices) there are 6 different visuals in a row...

(Summer is about to start.)

4/02/2007

02april2007monday

eyes were on the clock at 6.03
(details soon)
Advertising..

1. Three full page ads in a row,
IRIS Properties..building for life. (GULF NEWS)


1. pg-11
We deliver.
Ontime.
We deliver what and when we promise. What you don't see exeeds the quality of what you see. We deliver on quality, on budget, on time. Come discover a track record that spans 21 years of attention to detail. And you will then begin your building of trust with us.
Guaranteed.
IRIS Buildig for life

2. pg-13
We deliver
Value.
We invest in unique locations and long-lasting maerials to reduce log-term maintenance and operation costs. Our approach to planning results in buildings tht are made to last and retain the value you are looking for. Come discover a track record that spans 21 years of trust with us.
Guaranteed.
IRIS
Building for life


3. page-15
We deliver
Quality.
We deliver the four fundamental aspects of quality. Aesthetics, location, finishing and material workmanship. We research and analyze each of these areas to ensure we produce a lasting result. Come discover a track record that spans 2 years of building of trust with us. Guaranteed.
IRIS
Building for life.
------------------------- good concept. what would have made the agency to run the campaign in a single day, probably be the clutter of property ads in the print media now, and people may not recollect the previous message, even the ad itself.


Post production is good.

eyes OFF at 12.45